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How can I improve the following sentences to make them sound less cliche, yet appeal to the reader? Examples, suggestions and ideas are greatly appreciated. Please and thankyou!Despite her grief she managed to push away from him. What did he know; what did any of them know? She took one stumbling step before her legs gave way beneath her and her world faded to black. Darkness bled into darkness, and pain into pain.
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