Feels like there's nothing?

Question

Feels like there's nothing

I can do

To fix the problem's in my life

Things come together

Then seem to fall apart

Hoping on some kinda

Higher power

To see me through

Feels like there's nothing

I can do

I'm just one free man

In a world of slave's

Alone I carry my load

And knowone stands under me

What can I do

I'm trying harder

To excape the torment

Wile drowning in my tears

The darkness bleeds

From my heart

I'm falling apart

There's nothing I can do

Lyle20.4.2004

Answer 1

It's a good poem; I can mostly relate to it.

...something about the freedom and tone of your poem makes me wonder if it was really written on the date mentioned... just saying.

I like it, though.

Answer 2

The Lord is good, a strong hold in the day of trouble; and he knoweth them that trust in him.

The Lord also will be a refuge for the oppressed, a refuge in times of trouble.

For thou wilt light my candle: the LORD my God will enlighten my darkness.

And every man that hath this hope in him purifieth himself, even as he is pure.

For the hope which is laid up for you in heaven, where of ye heard before in the word of the truth of the gospel;

And he said unto them, Why are ye so fearful? how is it that ye have no Faith?

For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind...

So that we may boldly say, The Lord is my helper, and I will not fear what man shall do unto me.

Answer 3

have a quiet time with God where you can pour out every thing within you. God is so good that He will give you peace, joy and rest.

Answer 4

a lot of feeling but hopefully things are not so bad and you are wrong as there's lots you can and should do as after all a higher power still needs your help so good luck ---more exercise, more vegetables in your diet and no weeping....go for long walks even around the block is a good start.....tire yourself out physically and rest will come easier.!