Finish, improve, rewrite this poem or make a new one with the same concept oh and include feedback?

Question

Today i decided to p**s someone off

and in exchange was flipped off

they also suggested that i die

so i thought maybe i should or atleast would try

but then i thought how? ..perhaps suicide

but as soon as the answer had come to my head

another question had revealed itself instead

who knows how to kill whats already dead?!

10 points to the most creative one i guess.

Answer 1

Time is the rain drizzling down from the sky

Today someone suggested that I am to die

They were my reason, my soul, my mount

I had no one else, now more than ever I don't count

I sat in the road, one car came; it was too late to shout

It was horrible, that night when Time had a drought

In pain I sat, I found myself asking me this instead

How do you kill someone who is already dead?