Firefly - A Short Poem?

Question

"Firefly" - My love story.

Put me in a jar and keep me there forever.

Let me glow and let me know that

I'm your greatest treasure.

I'm your firefly and I will keep you heart light.

You will feel our love is real so

You be sure the lid's tight.

Answer 1

AWWW I LIKE THAT!

its cuteee!

Answer 2

very cute!

Answer 3

This is cute

I like the line put me

in a jar and keep me forever.

I like the line about the firefly

I will keep your heart light

To feel the love make sure

that lid is on tight.  

Answer 4

Cute poem.  Problem is that trying to keep the firefly in a tightly closed jar will guarantee the death of the poor little insect.

Answer 5

nifty little bit of verse

careful with being too tight or you'll smother that twinkling love

Answer 6

Great job, you should really submit it to http://www.papertank.com and see what they think.

I bet you could get a high rating for it on there!