Fix my dark armed dragon return deck?

Question

yo, was just wondering if any1 could provide some tips on and possible rate, my dark armed dragon/return deck. here it is

monsters - 22

3 Dark Armed Dragon

1 Dark Magician of Chaos

1 Darklord Zerato

1 Light and Darkness dragon

1 D-Hero Dasher

1 D-Hero Disk Commander

2 D-Hero Malicious

1 D-Hero Fear Monger

2 Armageddon Knight

1 Jinzo

1 Snipe hunter

1 sangan

1 strike ninja

1 E-Hero Stratos

1 Promethius

1 Dark Grepher

1 D.D Crow

1 Phantom of Chaos

Spells - 12

3 D-Draw

2 Allure of Darkness

2 Reinforcements of the Army

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mysical Space Typhoon

1 Monster reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Lightning Vortex

Traps - 8

2 sollemn judgement

2 Escape from Dark Dimension

1 Return from Different Dimension

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Crush Card Virus

Side Deck

3 pulling the rug

3 threatening roar

2 light inprisioning mirror

2 bottomless trap hole

1 Jinzo

1 D.D crow

1 D-hero Plasma

1 scapegoat

1 Prime Material Dragon

well thats it

Answer 1

this is a fast yet sturdy deck try this out 4 size

- 2 Ar Knight

+ 1 Fear Monger

+ 1 Dark Grepher

- 1 Phamton Of Chaos

+ 1 D.D. Crow

Answer 2

nice build, i lost to a build kinda like yours at shonen jump hawaii ;[

anyway, i might be mistaken but dont most DaD returns have 1,2 or 3 dd scout planes, dd scout plane is a really good card to remove from play.its also optional to put cauis in here if you want too,great card great effect.you should put in limit reverse  

and premature burial to abuse D-Hero Disk Commander because now A DAYS drawing seems to be priority one from what ive seen at the shonen.

your deck is 8/10

could i ask how has this done?

Answer 3

pretty good i would add another darklord zerato 9/10 if u want ill give u 50 bucks 2 jinzo 1 prime dragon 1 angal 07 and 1 lightsworn druid for 1 dad for the d draw only 1 of them the dark creator and the dark genral freed email me your answer