Fix my yugioh beatdown deck?!?

Question

i play by advanced format

Monsters: 19

3x chainsaw insect

2x beserk gorilla

1x insect knight

1x penguin soldier

1x man-eater bug

1x newdoria

1x exiled force

1x gigantes

1x spirit reaper

1x pyramid turtle

1x neo spacian grand mole

1x snipe hunter

1x white horn dragon

1x vampire lord

1x vampire's curse

1x prime material dragon

Magic: 11

2x mage power

1x soul exchange

1x lightning vortex

1x shield crush

1x creature swap

1x premature burial

1x heavy storm

1x MST

1x swords of revealing light

1x monster reborn

Trap:10

2x sakuretsu armor

1x torrential tribute

1x magic cylinder

1x raigeki break

1x royal decree

1x skill drain

1x ultimate offering

1x magic jammer

1x compulsory evacuation device

Answer 1

beat down is offense, so you dont need stalls like pengiun, swords of revealing, man eater, newdoria, spirit reaper.

dont use soul exchange cuz you lose your battle phrase, and you really need taht. take out 1 mage power and add in a united we stand.

there are a lot stronger 4 stars monsters. your beat stick monsters should be 2000+ unless theres a effect that is useful.

rethink a lot of your magic and trap. you really need to simplify the deck.

Answer 2

Monsters: 20

2 Prime Material Dragon

2 Berserk Gorilla

3 Gene-Warped Warwolf

2 Skilled Dark Magician

2 Luster Dragon

2 Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

2 Blue Thunder T-45

2 D.D. Assailant

2 Exiled Force

1 Spirit Reaper

Spells: 11

2 Lightning Vortex

1 Smashing Ground

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

2 Mage Power

1 Nobleman of Crossout

1 Swords of Revealing Light

Traps: 9

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Trap Dustshoot

2 Bottomless Trap Hole

2 Dust Tornado

2 Dimensional Prison / Sakuretsu Armor

Total: 40 cards

Answer 3

Pretty good, but some of your stuff counters your other cards (Skill Drain & Vampire Lord).  You should try a format with Goblin Attack Force & Indomidable Fighter Lei Lei with Skill Drain & Final Attack Orders.

Answer 4

Not bad, although you have almost a lot of support cards for different archetypes, it's not bad 7/10