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Foot in mouth poetry......care to comment?

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What drivel!

by Jellz (of course)

(c) 080717

I longed to write

a poem

and to make it

simply put,

but in the throes

of effort

I discovered

my right foot

was inserted in

my dental cave

tickling the ivories,

making such

an awful din,

stimulating my

my saliv’ries.

Now of course

to see

such drivel,

and it’s spread

upon the page,

its unsightly

and unpalatable

in poor taste

for this day

and age

So forgive me

for the spillage

of my intentions

literal /mental.

I assure

that this feat of

write,

is quite purely

acid-dental

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  1. Foot-in-mouth disease is one of mine as well when I post poetry. Glad to have company--and described in such a fine, funny way.


  2. I love it!!! I am still laughing!

    You have a true sense of humor & it comes across.

    God bless! <><

    (From one who qutie often suffers from 'foot in mouth syndrome')

  3. I love your poem,it is  humorous  ironic, well written and  I do hope  you are not apologizing for the apology.

  4. Glad you put so succinctly

    in this work, so bright

    all the anxious thoughts

    which I think at night!

    You go, girl!

  5. Foot in mouth

    one two three

    Jellz jiving

    living strong

    got her beat

    foot stomping

    tis a shame

    only one

    lol!!!

    Well done

  6. This is just perfect! I love it!

  7. Laugh Out Loud Poem!

    I enjoyed that. thanks!

    A little criticism, it could have been longer, ~smile~

    Great imagination and brilliant wording.

    You have talent!

    Top Poem, On 'Ya *Jelz*, ta.

  8. This is as hilarious as it is clever as it is splendid!

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