For Teen Books- Would you read this book?

Question

A teenage boy is in love with a female celebrity around the same age. So, during summer break he decies to go across country and meet her. It would be about his adventrues across the country. He would get into all kinds of problems along the way. And dont just say yeah i would read it just to get the best answer. Tell me your honest opinion. Suggestions would be greatly appreciated. thanks. Also, what audience would this appeal to?

Answer 1

It sounds good but you'd have to have wonderful writing to make it any good.  Use lots of adjectives and descriptive words.  And make it realistic.  No one likes reading about something that could never happen.  Make sure it could really be possible.  And make sure he doesn't meet her in some diner, crying, and he helps her - that doesn't often happen.  Maybe he could see her on the red carpet, and then it turns into a struggle for her to notice him.  Keep in mind - you don't have to do a happy ending - that's what keeps it real.  Good Luck!!!

Answer 2

Okay--honestly--no.

I would read it if it was something like he meets her and I don't know like pretends he is famous just to know her. She falls for it and they spend time together. She eventually finds out and confronts him.

And then you know what happens from there...

But a teenage boy and his adventures? If it's supposed to be a love story--then make it a love story. I would be so bored.

Sorry--you asked for my opinion.

Answer 3

so long as its not focusing on the romance, but on the journey..sure. it sounds quiet good. what kind of problems is he going to face?

and be sure to have a climax. as in HUGE problem. much bigger than anything else he's faced during the book.

and don't make her perfect. give her personality, a past, a real life.

i'd read it, i'm 15/16 but i know some 14 and 17 year olds that would also like this, so yeah.

please, do write it!

Answer 4

It sounds good, but in my humble opinion you need to be a little more realistic, like the guy meet a average girl in his trip and in the end he realizes that he only was in love with the celebrity girl because she's pretty but it's a superficial love, and with the other girl it's different, you know something like that because your target audience needs to feel that it really could happen, and I love the books about trips too :D  

Answer 5

i think it sounds pretty good, i would read it

i would suggest making it into two books though, the first one his journey there and meeting her at the very end, and then the second his journey with her

i think it would appeal to teenagers, girls or guys

Answer 6

Kind of sounds like a low grade version of Borat.

Answer 7

For me to read it and like it i would hope that the main character would find things out about himself. Also if other characters influenced his changes for the better.

Answer 8

It sounds interesting, if not very realistic. I love a good journey book. xD

Answer 9

i would read it because it seems interesting i like teen  book i like them alot so tell me the name of the book so i can check it out ok... i'm very interested=)

Answer 10

a boy that goes across the country for a girl.....very obsessive guy. its not really realistic. im not trying to change ur book or anything but maybe a couple should run away from their parents cause they dont want them together. all across the country with their dog. actually there was a real event on that.

Answer 11

Totally

An awesome twist to it would be if he was the son of a Greek god and monsters were trying to stop him from visiting or chasing her and he got past it all to find out that she was Artimes the goddess and she was interestied in him but she swore to be a maiden and i will stop there and let you come up with the restt