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JOURNEY

At the Garden's Centre, two trees stood

The journey of a lifetime goes from wood to wood.

Always too easy, saints of later day

Parents second guess, their faults gainsay.

As if, by means of grace to them unowned

We, of ourselves, their fate descry;

Its doom escape, forbear to die, unscathed triumphant

And with battle cry the Serpent trammel, undo his rant.

In righteous indignation adjudge the Source of life,

Call 'uncleanness' blood, and labour's worthy strife

Just due for her duplicitous part

Held less than Man as if wrought by his art

Though in pain She gives birth.

So the Journey begins,

The story of our worth

The Record of our sins.

Onward now it winds through courses yet unknown,

Leaves of wrath fall from the tree further to be blown,

Bitterness of the life's sap that sapped from us our life.

We thirst yet for another wherein lifesap yet doth flow;

Wholesome Tree where we may taste and grow.

Another Adam at that Tree stands

Arms outstretched with open hands,

Receiving the fruit bitter found when we did test and eat.

Another Eve stands thereby, serpent 'neath her feet.

They call us yet to be Create,

For we are but Dust before

That Moistness and the Breath

Giving life where lore

Taught us nought but death,

At the Centre of the Garden

The Place of Adam's skull.

In pride Iblis disdained to bow

Would then he'd known the How

By Woman he should be undone

His wrath the method wherein Journey's end

Should at the last be won

At the Centre of the Garden two trees stand.

© December 30, 2007 Albert K. Jungers All rights reserved

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  1. I love it! It's very nice.

    How is this poem that i wrote (I was sad at the time):

    SHATTERED DREAMS

    The full moon shines like a searchlight,

    searching searching for her sunshine.

    The stars gleam and shimmer

    like ancient shards of dreams and peace

    fractured by the cruel world of humanity.

    A siren sounds in the distance,

    the sound of glass shattering pierced my ears,

    the unavoidable truth melting my heart and soul

    and burning like cold iron.

    The world spins,

    Pandora's box opens,

    and a tear runs down my cheek.


  2. I really like it. The words you used makes it sound so realistic.

  3. Yes.

  4. Creatures of the fall we stand redeemed.  Iblis, Lucifer?

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