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For those with a creative side. Please complete the poem with one line.?

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When we first looked eye to eye

I thought that he was shy

I thought he was the kind of guy

who`d never tell me lies

But now he shows his pride

And he always makes me cry

I feel so torn and used inside

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  1. 1. I wish he rolled over and died

    2. He makes me want to hide

    3. I feel like i'm on a roller coaster ride

    Hope this helped!


  2. I'd like to turn on the juice and watch him fry.

  3. All my feelings for him have died.

  4. i now want to say good bye.

  5. Now my heart is cold and dry.....

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    and now my heart's stuck, too late to pry....

  6. What happened to my guy?

  7. When we first looked eye to eye

    I thought that he was shy

    I thought he was the kind of guy

    who`d never tell me lies

    But now he shows his pride

    And he always makes me cry

    I feel so torn and used inside

    Guess he's better left behind

  8. I'm going to be honost. I've been writing poems for years, and i have to tell you. this is really one of the most tantelizing poems i have read to date.

    I say the ending should be something along the lins of:

    My mother was a L*****n.

  9. the heart that once sparked has died

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    yet it hurts even more to say goodbye

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    too late to defend what we can no longer deny

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    the bird that sang now merely hangs in the sky

    and so on.

  10. Why'd i even try

  11. Now I see that he is not my kind of guy

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