Free Verse Poem. Please Rate on Scale of 1 to 10.?

Question

Alright, one night, I got really bored. So I got out the old paper and pen and decided to write one of the first poems I've ever written since probably 3rd grade. I decided to name it Tribute To The Norm since it barely made sense to me after reading it over. I'd enjoy your guys' opinions on it. Note: I'm only 13

(Since it's too big to type, supposedly, I'll just link a picture format of the poem to you guys...)

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w162/Xehanos666/untitled.png

And this is by me, no one else. Please don't steal.

Positive will be appreciated!!

:D

Answer 1

wut !3 r u sure about that??!! keep writing yer amazing you'll be like a pro by the time yer my age !6

Answer 2

so no to drugs....

its interesting need to read it a few times to make sense of it ...deep thoughts.