Free verse poem??? need this now .. easy 10 points..?

Question

can you please revise this poem into a free verse?

"When You Love Someone"

When you love someone

It seems like it's so easy to hide

You've loved him for so very long

You would think he could do no wrong

Everyday you would hope and pray

That he would always stay that way

You thought your love was growing true

And then one day it was all so blue

You thought your relationship would never end

But that was all fake and pretend

By this time you knew it wouldn't last

All the nice things he said were just in the past

You think about everything

But can do nothing

Wishing you could have him.

My teacher told me that I should lessen the rhyming words the fact that we should make a free verse poem but i'm really not good at that so please help me. I'm gonna pass it tomorrow..

Answer 1

R U tryin 2 get us to do ur homework? Or just help u out with ur poetry?

Answer 2

There's this wonderful book out there called a thesaurus--simply find a synonym for the last word in every other line.

Plus, ounce you start looking you may even find a word that says it better anyway. Good luck.