Friend wrote this,is it good?whats it mean?

Question

I sit in the darkness absorbing the light,

sucked into a whirlpool of destruction.

Walking alone,I can't be kept.

The beating in my chest gets devoured,

with every step.

Pushing aside all in my way,

heading up with no stops,no delays.

The faceless shadows stands tall.

He won't let me move.

Oblivious of it all

I can see right through him.

And I smile with gleaming eyes,because i know.

Answer 1

This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!

Answer 2

Sounds like 'the faceless shadow' is an unidentified fear; a threat of some kind yet there's an overwhelming desire to push on, pushing all aside in an inner need to overcome and see through the obstacle with confidence and determination, knowing one can overcome.

I think it's good.  I can sure feel it, and it sucked me into the mood; into the vision of the writer.  

Only one small critique (minor):

In the 4th stanza, line one, I would change the line to read:

"The faceless shadow stands tall,"

because in the following lines in that stanza, there is singular case useage so the first line should be as well with the word "shadow" instead of plural shadow(s).

Nice write!