Friends yesterday i wrote a poem did u like??????

Question

He is Bouncer,

The cute German Shepherd dog.

At times becomes aggressive

But likes to play with a log.

He has a long tail,

And drinks water in a pail.

He is a faithful dog,

And never lets in the stranger, even if fat or tall.

He is Bouncer,

The cute German Shepherd dog.

Short in height;

But does great job at night.

Answer 1

wow im not into poetry but this was really good

and being that i used to have a german shepherd

try adding more to it

Answer 2

The poem was too short, but i think that this is your first poem, while writing a poem try to make it little more attractive

Answer 3

for some reason I like it, not enough to rave over, but I like it just the same.

Answer 4

its lovely