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Fun writing exercise: write a brief excerpt describing ?

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a person's eyes and the emotion you see in them. Let's see how creative you can be! Thanks in advance to all who participate!!!

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  1. You're soft green eyes flash brown sometimes, just for small spaces of time. They make you look tougher than you are, and softer all at the same time. I can see your puzzlement through them, your thirst to know whats going on with the world. Your endless curiosity that cannot be quenched by plain facts. When you can't 'get' something, I can see that in your eyes too, as well as when you're disappointed; its a deep, bothered look, a look that says 'I can't stand it when you do this, but I'd never dream of saying so.' When you're happy, I see your eyes crinkle and light up like little stars, cautious but joyful.


  2. Confusion, at it's worst, slowly dissolving who you are, your discontent lifestyle screams to the world. One glance into your green eyes tells me everything. It tells me your bitter memories that you have fought so hard to run from all your  life, it shows those memories one step behind you. I see your misery in one glance, your eyes scream it, even though you bite your tongue to conceal it. The sadness you bare within,your pity jealousies, your bitter memories, your hidden tradgedies, they'll be the death of you yet.

  3. Your eyes are like an enigma to me. Some days they glow with fiery passion, and yet other times you just cannot conceal the sorrow that resides behind them. Some days they are like oceans of endless opportunity, but others they are like a dreary rain that sees no rainbow. Right now, though, there is not mistaking the accusatory glare in your teary blue eyes.

  4. I'm puzzled by the word 'excerpt' but i'll do as i think...

    "Eyes are very troubling things to have attached to your face. They see things, that you sometimes don't want them to see. They hold their stare with things, you don't want them to hold their stare on. They look you up and down, instead of in the face. Eyes are troubling. It's like they have a mind of their own. A mysterious, crypted mind."

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