Funny and exciting graduation invitation?

Question

Hi everyone,

I will be graduating college in two weeks. I want to invite my friends and family. But in addition to a formal invitation, I want to write something personal, funny, silly, and meaningful.

Here is what I have so far:

I wish to share this time with you

to laugh, to smile and cry

because, before I realize

precious four years really gone by

Finally, the day is near,

which is my biggest fear,

I can’t believe that school is done,

Look out world, HERE I COME!

What do you think? I think I need several more verses, does anyone have any ideas? I am graduating with two majors and a minor, but most people know that. Thank you for any feedback! :)

Answer 1

i think its great but u should add a lil more. like umm..

i wish to share this time with you,

to laugh, to smile and cry,

because, before i realize,

precious four years really gone by,

finally, the day is near,

which is my biggest fear,

i cant't believe that school is done,

look out world, HERE I COME,

im, walking down with my class of  2008,

sitting patiently, as i wait,

im ready to get my diploma now,

as we throw up our hats,

I am so very proud,

now its time to face reality now!!!

i hope this helps you congradulations

Answer 2

I think it's great the way it is!

Remember, less is more and people's attentions spans are very short........especially when it comes to reading.

It is fun, to the point and shows your personality. Keep it the way it is.