GOOD MORNING!! My morning poem=)?

Question

MORNING AGAIN

By

~ME~

Slowly I open my eyes,

quickly I shut them again,

Morning again,

to early to get up. . .

My eyes fly open again

and search for the clock

under all my discarded clothes.

AAHH! Its five forty five!,

I need to get up and go jogging!.

Only in the middle of the mile and

a half I must go and already

my breath is short,

nearly tripping on the leash as

my dog crosses sides.

Pulling on the rope to make her stay

on her side,

but just making her stop in my way.

Feeling my anger start as I fall over her,

but she quickly is at my side l*****g my face,

checking if I'm okay.

Gosh I have to laugh at how cute

she is, looking so worried as all dogs do

when they think there people are hurt.

Finally making it home

but still walking until my breath calms,

then sitting in the front yard with my dog

next to me,

waiting for the sun to rise.

What a great way to start the day.

Good Morning=) I hope every one has

a wonderful day!

Answer 1

awww.. that was cute! I liked it. Typically I'm not a morning person but this just made me all the happier. In the first stanza-fourth line you spelled "too" wrong.. you put "to".. but no big deal I thought it was cute.

I hope you have a wonderful day too!

Answer 2

very good the first few lines.

Rhythym lost after few lines

overall some lighter mood should have been reflected.

excellent approach for a good poem