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Gift for a friend, its a poem?

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this is for a girl I know her b-day is coming up and I want to give this to her, ladies would you feel good if a guy gave you a poem like this? Any help to kinda change it? to make it more emotional?

You

you're great,amazing,spectacular

you helped me time and time again in my life

when I fell, alot turned and ran

but you didn't

you cared for me when no one did

you offered a hand when no one dared

you gave me kindness,love, and support

like a good war buddy you pulled me out of a burning wreck

so i wouldnt get burned

you give and give

and you only want the same in return

maybe that's why I call you "Dar"

to be called youre friend would make me feel like the luckiest

to lose you, would feel like losing a loved one

does it sound good?

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  1. Its too predictable. write a song instead.


  2. i wouid give her some flowers and a card that tells her you feel about her.

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