this is for a girl I know her b-day is coming up and I want to give this to her, ladies would you feel good if a guy gave you a poem like this? Any help to kinda change it? to make it more emotional?
You
you're great,amazing,spectacular
you helped me time and time again in my life
when I fell, alot turned and ran
but you didn't
you cared for me when no one did
you offered a hand when no one dared
you gave me kindness,love, and support
like a good war buddy you pulled me out of a burning wreck
so i wouldnt get burned
you give and give
and you only want the same in return
maybe that's why I call you "Dar"
to be called youre friend would make me feel like the luckiest
to lose you, would feel like losing a loved one
does it sound good?
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