Give me advice on this Yu-Gi-Oh! Deck I made.

Question

Well, first I kinda modified a Rise of the Dragon Lords Deck but I realized that it had too many hi-lv monsters. I figured that the problem with it was that there were too many tribute monsters and that I should just make my deck revolve around only 3 tributes. So I bought a second deck and put the 2 together. Here's the list. I call it The Happy Deck:

Monsters:

2x Felgrand Dragon

2x Tyrant Dragon

1x Dragonic Knight( from Shonen Jump Magazine)

1x Morphing Jar

2x Masked Dragon

2x The Creator

2x The Creator Incarnate

2x Herald of Creation

1x Luster Dragon #1

2x Decoy Dragon

Spells:

1x Monster Reborn

2x Mausoleum of the Emperor

2x Reasoning

1x Soul Exchange

2x Lightning Vortex

1x Trade-In

1x The Shallow Grave

2x Foolish Burial

1x Brain Control

1x Premature Burial

Traps:

2x Dust Tornado

2x Sakuretsu Armor

1x Jar of Greed

1x Negate Attack

2x Magic Jammer

1x Trap Hole

1x Draining Shield

1x Cursed Seal of the Forbidden Spell

1x Magic Cylinder

Please give me advice and what cards to add/remove.

Answer 1

Monster Reborn is not banned until September I believe.

I personally don't like the high level monsters n Rise of the Dragon Lords (well most of them anyway.) They are a real hassle to get on the field. Felgrand can't be special summoned except from the graveyard, and it can be difficult to keep two monsters on the field for at least a turn. And the Creator, well, to be blunt I don't like him either.

Try this.

Monsters

-Felgrand Dragon

-Herald of Creation

-The Creator x2

-The Creator Incarnete x2

+Armed Dragon Lv3 x2

+Armed Dragon Lv5 x2

+Lord of D.

+Divine Dragon Ragnarok

Spells

-Masoleum of the Emperor

-Trade in

+Flute of Summoning Dragon

+Swords of Revealing Light

Traps:

--Magic Jammer

+Trap Jammer

+Torrential Tribute

Fusion:

King Dragun

5 Headed Dragon

Answer 2

Monster Reborn is banned

Personally i don't like using Saku armor,nor draining seal, Lightning or anything magic Jammer related. It seems like you build a dragon deck from the monsters you have, but that's up to you. try to make a deck that compliments itself more, rather than sheer brute force.

Answer 3

You should have less copies of your tribute monsters and ways to prevent people from activating traps when you do summon felgrand and dragonic knight. use mirage dragon and some more sakuretsu, negate, trap hole and etc.

Hope I helped.