Give me what do you think?i m not a native speaker ,,so be gentle please

Question

I will go to my place even If I have no where to go

I will fill the seas with my tears

if the seas gone dry

I will never forget how much I loved you one day

And you will be sorry for leaving me

If you ever feel

Neither I nor you were the sinners

Neither I nor you were the angels

But in my heart I know that you are

The best man I ve ever seen

If there was a man but you

I will go to my castle if the world is ash

And I will create my own zone if I m lost

And whether you are mine or not

I will never be but yours

They say life change people

They say life change hopes

And I walk everyday the same!

What didn’t change in me?

I think it’s the name

Answer 1

Oh...

Honestly, you bedazzled me much..

I was caught up in it like a rapture.

Good piece.

There are just a few little rough edges though, like 'if there was a man but you'. Did you mean to say 'no man but you'?

I like your work very much.

Peace.

Answer 2

This is an excellent poem, very impressive if English is not your first language.

Answer 3

Thanks for sharing your touching poem. The poem shows the depth of hurt, tears so many, yet forgiveness and no blame. There is also a  strong sign of strength that you could create your own residing place and will continue to love if not loved in return. You have learned English well, but I suggest you consider adding an (s) to change and say yet in place of and. Thus:

They say life changes people

They say life changes hopes

Yet, I walk everyday the same!

Your poetry reveals strength, character, and determination, even with the tears.