Globalising obesity!?

Question

I have to construct an action plan for SOSE. the problem is how to solve obesity, i've come up with a few solutions, adverising, child education, tighter food regulations. i think advertising would work best. i thought the best way would be to stop fast food companies.

can somebody help me write a small paragraph (im very bad at this) about the solutions i've chosen and have some evidence to support the chosen solutions. i really just need to get started off... thanks

Answer 1

Following the above comments and findings, in conclusion  I would like to recommend the following measures to curb / reduce obesity. Solutions are various and all steps must be taken in unison.  School Education, advertizing, public health education, preventive programs and measures, tighter food regulations including the dismantling of fast food are measures that we have to look into.  On the fast food closure, they could be given opportunity to change to a healthier diet - menu.

Answer 2

Paragraphs are easy, I won't write one for you but heres some simple steps:

Topic sentance: A simple statement about what your going to say.

Body: Go in order, speak it out as you go, make sure it flows from one sentance to the next, from one point to another.

Conclusion: State your point again, and if there is another paragraph, somehow word it so it flows naturally to it.

Remember, speak it out, then wright it down.

Good luck! Obesity must be combatted, and I am certain you will crack the paragraph writing thing!