Go to her heart ,poem please read ?

Question

Say

What you want

She says

But I don’t have anything to say

I m the unread page

Puzzle

lost path on the earth

That never found a country

Tell me what you are

She says

I was a little girl one day

And that’s all I know

After all

I m gone

alone

The fire is unspoken

And the anger is rage

Pain torments my heart

and my body is lost

Shout

She says

Who screams

Too late

Never gets what she wants

Who fight after the end

Is a loser in both sides

Die

She says

I wish

But even this is far

They say life is hope

And I find it an endless jail

Answer 1

i really like that i especially like the "she says" bits they punctuate the poem nicely

is it a conversation between you and your thoughts?

Answer 2

Wow, that was very interesting to read...i don't often encounter poems where it's a "someone says" thing...thanks for sharing...

Words are the best invention....Keep using them.....=)

Answer 3

Oh Boy........Very good.    I like the conversation going

on, i've written like this myself in some poetic poems .

I find it dark, as to say, many a young person can find

themselves in this situation and i see a relation to the Poem

Answer 4

im really chilled out at the moment and enjoyed that :-)