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Gone to take the flag. poem?

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Is it time's wast to morn a friend.

Time spent in mind's images.

Pictures viewed of pleasant times.

Remembered slights of bickering fights.

Thoughts dwell on this not said,

Left for other day now lost away.

my friend has gone. I miss him.

Long for excited talk.

Games of golf, drinks of beer.

No am I silly to shed this tear.

Gone friend, hole left to putt.

I have the time left to wast

To morn a friend.

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  1. Mourning a friend is never time wasted. It is important for them and for us. They nourish our hearts. We keep their memories alive.


  2. Farewell

  3. Time well spent...

  4. I like it a lot it is really nice but it needs a bit more ryming in it thoe.

    Other words I love it. :)

  5. We must let ourselves feel the pain or it will fester forever. It is never a waste of time to mourn a friend.  You have shown your emotions in this very good poem.

  6. Its a good poem

    It is touching

    I like the free-verse outline you used for this poem

  7. My sincere sympathies for your loss.  It's a lovely poem.

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