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Good Spontaneous Poem? Appreciate critiques?

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Fissures vein the dry dirt trail

their shallow abyss gives way to infinite space underfoot

the trivial path crests the edge of the wispy bluffs

condescending the ocean whose waters break at its shores without tire

like a child tugging at the pantleg of a heedless parent

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  1. Pretty good!

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