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Good Start? Please State The Truth?

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As I walked down the stairs I could hear the muffled cries that our friends and family made downstairs. It was too hard for me to bear. I wanted to run into my room and never come out. I wanted to just die, just like she had, but I knew my father needed me. He needed me more than ever now. Without both of us he would surely fall apart. As I thought of running up to my room and hiding from everyone I felt a little guilty. Wouldn’t she want me to live my life for all it is worth? Wouldn’t she want me to finish high school? Wouldn’t she want me to get married and have a little girl named after her? She would. I knew she would.

please even if you think it sucks tell me i won't get mad or anything.

i was pointed out that the baby part was cheesy which i agree now, but i don't feel like taking it out just yet.

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  1. It's mediocre, ceretainly not the worse thing I've ever read, but not very good either. There's absolutely no mystery as to where the story is going or how it's going end. It's overly typical and has no "color" to it.


  2. Huh? waddayaritinabookorsumtin?

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