Good cover letter? *opinions please!*?

Question

above the actual "meat" of the letter are the talent agencies adress and my contact information, at the bottom is "thank you for your time" & my first and last name.

To whom it may concern,

Enclosed please find my headshot and resume for you to consider. I am seeking representation in acting, specifically film and television. Please give me a call at the phone number above at your earliest convenience so we can set up a time when we might be able to meet. I look forward to speaking to you you in the near future!

Answer 1

You need to stand out, what you have written is a bit generic (everyone will have written roughly the same). Make your individual qualities stand out from the other people, use interesting vocabulary and be eye catching!! Find out the name of the person you are writing to - if you use their name they will be impressed you know who you are addressing (ie, you have done your research = means you really want this). I am training to work as a producer/director in the tv industry and you MUST set yourself apart. Good luck! And don't be afraid to be different. It is what everyone is looking for these days.

Answer 2

you need to show them you have experience in acting for them to take you seriously

Answer 3

If you are under 18, your parents have to write the letter, and it should be addressed to a person. It needs to be to the point and not giving instructions. "I am seeking representation for my daughter. Enclosed are her resume and headshot. I will call your office in two weeks to make sure you have received this packet. Thank you for your consideration." "Sincerely yours, "  and "Encls" after the signature. Make sure it is a formal business letter. Acting is a business, approach it that way.  For more info read "Acting as a  Business" by Brian O'Neil.