Good night? Any suggestions please?

Question

Good Night: To All My Friends

"Good Night" I am saying

To the sky and the clouds

To the woods and the founts

To the flowers to the sounds

Of the birds and the childs.

Goodnight all, love I've found.

Don’t know if I'll be here again

Don’t know if I'll return

I drank a silver drop of rain

I tasted the meaning of love

I threw out all the pain

Hate not you to leave you

But it’s the sweet taste of love

Departs me from all of you.

Answer 1

Gud. Try better.