Good or Bad storyline?!?

Question

I am in a communications technology class. Our first project is to film a 5 minute story of our choice (but we have to film it using different camera angles). Here is my story:

We take a shot of the library from outside. A boy enters the library and looks at two books. One book says "how to pass school" and the other says "How to be a professional stealer". He decides to read the stealer book. He then goes upstairs quietly and sneaks into a classroom. When he goes into the classroom, he sees a student working. The stealer follows as the book told him and he steals the book without the student seeing him. Once the door shuts, the student realizes his book is missing. The student runs out of class, and runs down the stairs. The stealer thought he would get away, but the student found the stealer. The two chase one another around the school until the student catches the stealer. The student gets his book back, and the stealer realizes that the book didn't help him become a stealer.

Answer 1

I rate it a B-.

Answer 2

if you had put in a catch like while chasing the thief the student slipped down and appeared to be seriously injured, the thief having a bought of conscious decides to go back and provide aid looks in the persons wallet and discovers this was and old childhood friend who has a serious medical blah blah or that this is a person researching how to make air born poisons that has foreign contact names and addresses in their wallet, purse.

Answer 3

First of all...stealer is not a word. Its theif. second that sounds ok if ur an amaeteur but the ending is very boring and typical.  Id work out some kinks maybe add a witty ending ...like after the boy victoriously steals the book he sits down for a cigarette and someone steals his backpack...thats ironic and not as corny as people chasing others around like children.