Good poem or cheesy?

Question

So i had to write a poem for my English class and I dont know it if is any good. Could you please give me your comments? Thanks

The wind's hands played with my

ringlets of curls

The wind's feet shook the tree

abundant with squirrels

The wind's mouth whistled

a subtle tune

While the winds face showed

no signs of gloom

The wind's hair sent

chills up my spine

The wind's beauty was

nothing short of devine

The wind's arms squeezed me tight

and made me laugh with glee

But through the whole affair, the wind was something I could not see

Answer 1

I like it.

If I were your teacher how about an A-?

Some names...

The Wind

Beautiful

Everything

Answer 2

How old are you? If you're older than a sophomore in high school I'd say it's ok not so great, and if you're younger then I'd say it's good.

Answer 3

F+ or D-. I got so bored that I could not even finish it.

Answer 4

great imagery, as man others have said. i'll give it a A. good use of words as well! :)

Answer 5

Cheesy.

Answer 6

I really like it!  Very nice imagery!

Answer 7

wow this is so good i think i'll use it myself.

how about wind vs. me

the wind and i

grab hold of me wind

Answer 8

Good

Answer 9

it's really good! and if a poem YOU Wrote is called cheesy, tell them no way -its original-you wrote it yourself!

Answer 10

Its good...has a hint of cheeziness but its good...i have always wanted 2 write a happy poem like this

Answer 11

OMG  that is so good. i would buy ur book! OMG

Answer 12

cheesy and predictable.

Answer 13

Yeah it's interesting, and I think it captures the imagination. Moonfaerie x*x

Answer 14

A little cheesy, but not bad.  I'd recommend that you reconsider some of your word choices, and find another [body phrase for an aspect/part of the wind] to replace 'beauty.'  Note:  you want 'divine' there in line 12; otherwise, your spelling is okay.

Hands ('fingers?), feet (toes?), mouth (s/b 'lips', I think), face ('mien,' maybe?), arms; these are all body parts.  But 'beauty' isn't.  You might consider 'carriage' or 'bearing'--a phrase that relates more naturally to the anatomical anthropomorphisms around it.

Don't take my suggestions as anything but suggestions.  It's your poem, finally.  Nevertheless, I think  you'll take some profit CONSIDERING alternatives.

Answer 15

is it imagery? anyway. its rlly good.

Answer 16

it good you should enter it in a contest

Answer 17

good post it on quizilla they do poems too

Answer 18

I like it very much.

A few pointers

"ringlet of curls" seems a little wordy and "devine" is spelled "divine"

Otherwise, I really like it. The last two lines are my favorites :-)

Answer 19

Very cool poem, I like it. I'd give you an A for it.