Good skin care video?

Question

This is my first attempted at how to videos on youtube. Is this any good or not?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Chn8-BgW4ns

Answer 1

I think it's a good video but you might want to make it a little shorter if you can.

Answer 2

its tooo long

and ur acccent sounds fake!

sry if its real but it sounds so fake!