Got a moment to critique a poem?

Question

This was written 28 years ago, so please be gentle.

SOLILOQUY

A life of solitude I lead,

no friends or neighbours do I need

to pester me with 'good intent'

and spew forth words that are not meant.

So I'll just keep to my own ways,

while slowly pass the endless days;

and yet...I cannot help but feel,

as by my bed each night I kneel

in prayer to the good Lord above,

it must be nice to know...true love!

Answer 1

In your very words

I stand, for Loneliness,in life

I Make my choices,

to stay in the dark,

When I know I want the light.

Answer 2

Profound and well written

Answer 3

Im not really into poetry but thats really nice!

Answer 4

Nice!

Answer 5

It does'nt just come from above,

A human being,  can give ...true love.

Stay, solitude and never roam.

And find yourself, all alone...