Grammar check in short paragraph?

Question

please help me correct any grammar in following para

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Should you need further information or have any queries please contact me or Ahmed’s immediate supervisor & software development team leader Mr. XYZ at [phone]

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Answer 1

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Answer 2

"Should you need further information, contact me or Ahmed’s immediate supervisor & software development team leader, Mr. XYZ, at [phone]."

The "queries" part is a little redundant.  Otherwise, just put commas around Mr. XYZ and you're all set.

I would think you would capitalize Software Development Team Leader, if that's a title, or at least Team Leader, too.

Edit:  If the letter is to you, the letter cannot refer to you in the third person. The HR manager should write, "For any additional information, interested parties may contact me or your immediate supervisor, ______________, at ___________."

Answer 3

You can start like This:

For any further information or for any queries please contact Ahmed or me (give your name here) immediate Supervisor & Software development team leader Mr.XYZ at [phone].

ok.

Answer 4

For any further information or queries please contact me(Ahmed) or my immediate supervisor & Software development team leader Mr.______ at__________

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