Graphic Design Help (My Final Thesis)?

Question

Is my work good or not?

I have designed it for my BFA final thesis. Your comments or suggesions would be helpful to me.

http://i36.tinypic.com/2j349dj.jpg

Thanks everyone

Answer 1

It looks absolutely stunning to me - well done... it's truly superb!  : )

Answer 2

I like it.  You grabbed plenty of color and the pic told a story.  Pretty good. It"flows" naturally.  

Answer 3

I have to say, I don't really get the message. To me it just says "big expanse of water with coloured material floating in it", it doesn't really tell me what's special about Haier washing machines.

They don't use detergent, so the message is supposed to be "totally natural way to wash your clothes" and "good for the environment" right? There are no indications in your image that tell me that. I mean water is lovely sure, but if there are no indications of *where* the water is it fails to have any kind of implication. Is it a lake or the sea or what? If you're saying Haier are good for the environment, why can't I see the environment?

The other problem I have is with the fabric you've put into the water. The patterned ones in particular stick out, because you've put them in this 'real' context (lying floating in water) but they're being viewed straight on, as if the material is hanging vertically from the ceiling. Instead of viewing them as part of the water-landscape, my eye tells me that the perspective is "wrong".

So that's my two-pennyworth. Sorry to be a drag :)