Guys! Hello there! please rate my poem? Its about love i think?

Question

Heres a poem I wrote, basically im a young man in school. If you guessed it, there is a young girl that exudes a womanly grace in my school that appeals to me. As I still put my studies first and she might be attached, well it wont hurt to write alil poem right? [I just wrote it on impulse]

The Things I Love About You

Walking down college alleyways,

My gaze has stumbled upon your lovely grace,

Ah if you only knew,

The things I love about you,

I love your jet black hair thats as smooth as cool night,

I love your wide smile that gladdens my heart,

I love your woman's posture, as graceful as feather light,

I love your oval eyes, shining like diamond art.

I swoon in your prescene,

all manliness dissolved.

If only I had a wisp of cupid's essence,

the pain in my heart will be resolved.

Answer 1

wow, that is a wonderful poem!

you have a tallent, keep it up :)

Answer 2

You're quite the catch, I am sure. It was very nice.  Use spell check next time hun.  Presence, not prescene. Hope she catches the spell. Good luck.