Guys Please Give me A raiting of this poem?

Question

I Love You:

Well when I was born I was small

Weak and Inferior

And everything and all

Didn’t matter to me, you see I was Weak and Inferior

I will never know why I did what I did or what I’m going to do

But I know one thing I know it’s that you complete me

I’ve been such a fool

I let u slip from my hands, don’t you see?

I won’t love other women

But you love other men

I also did not lie

But I admit I did spy

You are so beautiful

You are so kind

But for you I’m neither

But mean and full of spite…

For the month before last

You broke up with him and threw me to the grass

Your friends say I deserve you

But do you think that’s really true

Well I do

On my birthday I used my only wish on you

I wished, Please God

Make her life colourful and not just Blue

Keep her happy not sad or gloom

Let her Love be as nice as I would have been

Even better my Lord, I would like if this dream could come true

And as I hear it did

You are having fun

You look even better than before

All because of me, I wasted my only wish on you

There’s one thing I still haven’t told you, and I’m keeping it till the end

Sancha Fulton I Loved You

And trust me I still do

Sancha was a Girl i used to see... Wrote this after another girl broke up with me... If any1 knows her plz dont send it to her

Answer 1

"On my birthday I used my only wish on you"

yes im embarrassed to say this but i started crying uncontrollably at this line.. so simple and yet so so beautiful

great poem really well done

you've made me miss my ex and now i cant stop crying!!

Answer 2

I can tell you really love this woman. It's a heartfelt poem and i hope everything works out for you! Good poem!