Guys!!! Pls help me with English writing and what do you think of this?

Question

I recently received my college report and I need to have reassessment one subject. That subject taught by 2 lecturers. I did pretty well in Lecturer A's class, I completed and handed in ALL assessments on time and I got 1Pass and a few Credit. For Lecturer B, I know I did bad... I had poor attendance BUT I did handed in ALL assessments(although sometimes maybe one day late) and at least all got a PASS.

I got 47% for this subject, just a little bit fail and the mark isn't fair, lecturer B doesn't like me at all, I believe that this is part of the reason why he gave me that low mark! I don't want to be reassessment cos this cost me AUD270 and I rather spend it on clothes! By the way I really think the mark isn't fair as I have completed all tasks given by the lecturers! What do you guys think?

I need to write a letter to the deputy head but don't know how as I'm not good at English. Could anyone pls try to help me to write it politely?

Many thanks :)

Answer 1

Do you think, in the real world, that being less than half right is good enough?

You blame your teachers. Don't you think you should shoulder some responsibility for yourself?

You can't  improve unless you work at it. Having someone else write a letter for you does not make YOU any smarter. Only applying yourself to the job at hand can do this.

On the positive side, you say you're not good at English. I had no trouble reading what you wrote.  For the most part, grammar and punctuation was good. Spelling was also fair.

Maybe you are better than you think? Come on, give it a go!

Answer 2

There are two thing your can do.  First talk to the teacher and get her/his response to why you did not pass if your work was of passing quality.  You stated your work was late most of the time. It could be that the amount taken off for lateness even for one day was your down fall. Also some teachers take off for attendance.  Second you could always go to another teacher in that field and see what she/he thinks of your work.  If the teacher just dislikes you and no points taken off for lateness of work or attendance then you may have a case.