Guys/girls please rate/fix my new deck because i want to make sure that it's good enought to win.

Question

MONSTERS-22

2amphibian beast

2gagagigo

2humaniod slime

2revival jams

1levia-dragon-daedalus

1mobius frost monarch

1orca mega fortress of darkness

1torpedo fish

1cannonball spear shellfish

1nightmare penguin

1star boy

1mother grizzly

1yomi ship

1maiden of aqua

1sea serpent warrior of darkness

1aqua mador

1seven colored fish

1amphibious bugroth

MAGIC-12

3steel shell

1umi

1legendary ocean

1back to sqare

1big wave small wave

1dian keto the cure master

1heavy storm

1salvage

1share the pain

1stim pack

1nightmare's steelcage

1power of kaishin

Traps-6

1tornado wall

1jam defender

1divine wrath

1negate attack

1magic cylinder

1sakuretsu armor

Answer 1

its good but you should use at least a negate attack, or raigeki break trap card just in case you dont want to lose any LP if you are low on them

Answer 2

That is not that good of a water deck.  Try this

x3 mother grizzly

x2 amphibious bugroth

x1 maiden of the aqua

x2 star boy

x3 gigagaggio

x2 nightmare penguin

x1 penguin soldeir

x1 mobius the frost monarch

x1 terroking salmon

x1 legendary fisherman

x1 suijin

x1 levia dragon-dardulas

x3 hydrogeddon

MONSTERS 22

x3 legendary ocean

x1 lighting vortex

x1 monster reborn

x1 MST

x1 heavy storm

x2 salvage

x1 swors of revealing light

x1 smashing ground

x1 soul exchange

x1 fissurre

MAGICS 13

x1 mirror force

x1 magic cylinder

x3 solemn jugdements

x1 sakueratsu armor or widespread ruin. (depends on what you like more)

This is a Good Blueprint For A Water Deck