HELP ME AGAIN! IM BEGGING U!! NEEED BOOK HELP!!

Question

oKay i need some help. im writing a story and im stuck. here what i have so far:

A young Adventures,Sturborn, Free Sprited, Half human, Half fish girl falls heads over heels for the town theif. The town theif also falls heads over heels for the young mermaid. The only thing that is in their way love is her father and the princes of the NorwegiAN Sea. He father is making her marry him.

what should happen? should she marry the thief or the prince? should she run away with the theif? what would happen? Should her father be King Trition? please please help me!! what should happen in the end!! im begging u! please help me!!! i want it to be an adventures/ romantic kinda of book. like a love that can never be!! please please help me!!

Answer 1

The questions you ask are the most basic plot points of your story. No one can write them but you. Basic writing advice: plot out your whole story before you begin writing. You can't start until you know where you are going.

Answer 2

The thief and the prince both turn out to be g**s and elope to San Francisco. The mermaid turns away from mankind forever and marries a Tuna.

but seriously, try without the caps

Answer 3

I think you should let her be with the theif. Make something magically happen and permamently turn her into a full human. then she could go live on land with the theif. Let her dad send some kind of earthquake or something. You sound creative and imaginative. what's your book called?

Answer 4

calm down! i think that the mermaid should run from her father, go on an adventure w the thief, find her mother which she thought was dead, it be illegal to marry the thief bc she is a mermaid and he is human although he thinks she is human, then when the thief discovers her secret he leaves her and then the prince tells her that he is dead. then at their wedding, the thief shows up and says hes sorry and stuff like that and she finds out he wasnt dead. then when she thinks her father will finally disapprove the prince and approve the thief, her father gets terribly sick and she has 2 go and find a potion 2 save his life. im sure u can make up the rest on ur own and i hope this helps = D

p.s. i also would like 2 b an author. how old are u?

Answer 5

take your time to write this story, a good story doesn't take a day to finish

Answer 6

Is the identity of the theif known? Can he and the price be the SAME person?