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HELP ME FINISH PLEASSEE! EASYY 10 POINTSS!!!?

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dont act like you knew

that i was all over you

dont pretend you knew

that i wanted you

dont you really see

that i disagree

maybe you werent the one for mee

this is really lame

its just not the same

i am really sick of your little game

[ is it okayy? HELP ME FINISHH ]

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  1. its okay.

    do something with less ryms.


  2. i dont like it its too rhymyy like little kiddish type of thing

  3. So lets not pretend

    Cause now it is the end

    Over and through

    Im finally over you

    And it would be best

    If you moved on too

    I don't know I'm just trying to make it the way you did?? I hope its alright:)

  4. The game you played,

    from the start,

    Stop messing with my fragile heart!

  5. you are very creative... but it just rhymes too much

  6. Remeber not all lyrics HAVE to rhymn, although its good for them to rhynm because it creates catchyness but too much of it seems like your trying to hard.

    FINISHED VERSION:

    The things I went though with you

    The time I spent on you

    The games I played with you

    It was a mistake and Im though

    (Chorus)

    dont act like you knew

    that i was all over you

    dont pretend you knew

    that i wanted you

    dont you really see

    that i disagree

    maybe you werent the one for mee

    Now Im sure you wernt the one for me

    this is really lame

    its just not the same

    i am really sick of your little game

    (Chorus)

    Now I realize

    I can see behind your eyes

    I see the truth

    That lied underneath the lies

    Your stupid, childish and a little bit conceited

    But I dont care, Not anymore

    Cuz I dont care about you

    (Chorus)

    Your really lame

    You could never stay the same

    Never again will I fall for your game

    Swich some words if the meaning doesnt portray what you feel. Hope you like it! :)

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