HELP ME with that STORY?

Question

I'm thinking to write a story about a very beautiful anthropologist named Jamie. Jamie went to study all alone an Amazon tribe and during this stay, she had sexual relationships with the King of the tribe and got pregnant. When it was the time for the delivery, Jamie was treaty like a queen. She was allowed to give birth in the royal stool and was attended by the Royal midwife. Jamie didn't understand their language but with the help of that midwife, she pushed out a boy. The tribe made a ceremony when Jamie's son was born because her child has royal blood. They also offer Jamie to eat her placenta but she refused to do that.

When this study finised, she wanted to take home her son but the tribe didn't allow to do this because he was a member of the royal family. One night, when everybody of the tribe was sleeping, she escaped with her son. But the tribe localizes them and killed Jamie.

Could you HELP ME with the physical description of Jamie? What was Jamie's middle name? Do you like this story?

Thank you!!!

Answer 1

Sounds great to me, I'd like to read more. Are you on any writing sites? I'm on http://chapteread.com They have cool features. worth checking out!! and good luck.

Answer 2

honestly, Jamie can be anything you want her to be, I usually think of someone I know, then mix bits of other people in, making the character totally different. I like the story, but I think the story would be better if the king was in love or something, so Jamie isn't perceived as, well, easy.  

Answer 3

She doesn't need to have a middle name.

I really like your story.