Haha, really awful poem about a pub?

Question

Sit back

Have a beer

Forget your troubles

Come over here

The pub at the edge

Of town, this town

Take a shot

Slug your lager down

Girls tap their feet

A high old time

Feet move faster

Dance floor prime

Foam sloshes over

Glasses spill

Can you say...

Hangover thrill?

The band plays

Loud, loud, louder

Little man on a fiddle

Short, but stouter

For a bluesy harmonica

The lights begin to dim

And the din quiets

Chance of sound, slim

And the harmonica lilts

And the notes singe their hearts

Raw emotion pours

And strikes them like darts

Answer 1

Ha! I like that! Funny, and good rhymes. It's really not awful.

Answer 2

wait I know!!!!! Its about a pub...OMG OMG

Answer 3

I liked it well and at the end your little twist about the playing darts!!! Good job!!! Cheers!!

Answer 4

ha its funny. its bot bad at all really. love it.

Answer 5

lol not bad