Haiku homework? Help pleasee :D?

Question

i`m doing my English homework.. but i can`t seem to figure out any haikus from my head.. o find any online that my teacher probably wont look T___T I need 5 poems.. SO FAR I HAVE:

Big crowded highschool

So boring and oh so dull

The bell rings freedom!

This is a haiku

I think this haiku is good

Don`t you think so too?

FIsh are friends not food

I`m so bad with syllables

But here are five more

please help me? to make them better, too:)

and 2 more haikus<33?

Answer 1

5

7

5

and an economy of words

the first is good, I would use tolls instead of rings.

the second is depressingly uncreative.

the third, well. you certainly do need help.

pick one subject per haiku. they are so easy!

Fish are friends not food

Pretty scales shimmer in light

undulating splash

haikus HAVE to be as descriptive as possible, in very few words. they are easy, and if you are having a hard time then you ought to read more. you must have a minuscule vocabulary if you cant find adequate syllables. try here: http://www.synonym.com/

think of what you want to say, then find the words with syllables that fit.

Answer 2

Help! Help! Help! Please help!

I am distressed and confused.

Oh darn the haikus!

Look up in the sky.

Away from sunshine and rain.

Walk toward the path.

++++++++++++++++++++++

The fish one is horrible!

You should say something like this...

Swim like a free fish.

Without worries or problems

I envy the fish.

Answer 3

I think yours are excellent.  Here&#039;s a couple more:

Japanese art form

For an English assignment

What&#039;s that all about?

No offense, teacher

If I want to learn haikus

I&#039;ll go to hai school.