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Haiku poem about being trapped??? plz help

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Haiku poem about being trapped??? plz help

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  1. I wasn't intending to stay in China for eternity


  2. I spread my wings

    The tips brush cold steel

    My cage is solid I am trapped

    Haiku should be 17 syllables, so I guess it depends how you pronounce steel (one syllable or two)

    If 2 then change line 2 to They brush cold steel

  3. I wake up weary

    blank-walled cubicle all day -

    I'm going nowhere

    Hope this helps. :)  Also, hope it's okay that I posted this same haiku on my blog at:

    http://currenteventshaikus.blogspot.com/...

  4. Alone, I lay here

    Imprisoned by the cold walls

    Closing in on me


  5. Crescent moon holds star

    Dawn comes now the star is gone

    Next night caught once more

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