Haiku poem re-posted with meanings please critique thx : )?

Question

Please provide opinion on Haiku. Cheers. : )

1.

Opened winged dove fly’s,

Glory of the winter snow,

Heaven awaits thee.

2.

Autumn shed’s its leaves,

Withered rose which lost its glow,

Beauty glows within.

3.

Nux Vomica lips,

Rain drops poring down my cheeks,

Singing winter songs.

4.

Springs inspiration,

Flower of zinc etched painting,

Art gallery piece.

5.

life summer beauty,

Flower of zinc porcelain,

Boys do mesmerize.

6.

Life summer beauty,

Flower of zinc porcelain,

Boys favourite toy.

3 hours ago - 3 days left to answer.

Additional Details

2 hours ago

1.Spirit released and goes to heaven, while loved ones mourn of departed person.

2.Beauty of person exist within, no matter of age.

3.Lies and deception causes sadness and result in relationships ending.

4.Artist painting

5.Beautiful woman

6.Beautiful woman Ver. 2

Flower of Zinc is what they use in Ink and in makeup.

Nux Vomica is an in Australian plant which, the stem is poisonous.

Answer 1

wow, I like them all, and thank you for the explanation at the end, that helped with the Nux Vomica, I had no clue what that was, lol. great job.

Answer 2

1 I liked. 2, the second line needs work. How about " on withered rose, petals hang" 3, typo on pouring. Interesting as to me it relates to a soured relationship 4, The coming out party when the layers of winter clothes are removed? 5, I like but how about: "boys are mesmerized"  6, No.  don't like the reference to toy.

Galactia pens

seasonal inspirations

neonman enjoys!

Answer 3

i like it alot,  very cool and deep :)  i'm happy you explained what  everything was,  that made the poems more enjoyable

Answer 4

That's wonderful!