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Has this ever crossed your path?

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"Yellow Flag" - a black cat

Walk with me into the night,

remember me as we were;

angels who fled from the light,

never steady, never sure.

Don't think of our one last chance,

how we lost our way and sight.

Take my hand, can we just dance?

Before the dawn says good-bye,

walk with me into the night.

Memory will set us free,

walk with me into the night.

As dawn breaks no one will see

that we fled the final fight.

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Thirteen line poem divided in three stanzas, four lines in the first stanza, five in the second, four in the third. Every line must be seven syllables.

Rhyme scheme: Abab--cacdA--eAea

A=repeated first line

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  1. this is a wild setup.

    ill need the right subject

    and repeating line..

    this is a hard one E!


  2. Lots of entanglements out there, lots of wickedness under the white satin, no matter how U divide or rhyme it, because U described a dream which all (average) people dreamed of, or encountered in reality.Cheers !  

  3. Very easy to read and see. Another very good poem.

  4. no the roads i walk on are usually quite clean? u shud hire a sumone to do the same  

  5. Simply fascinated with the structure! Very fine work.  Is this the minor demons who move us to avoid Armegeddon?  Be damned now and avoid the rush, and we'll dance our way through endless night ere day.

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