Have I invented another new peotic form. I'll call it the post modern crapee?

Question

Crappee Compaq bang bang

My laptop has started ..................... working again

It's as good as the day ...................... I found it in a skip

The cloud lines have parted ............. and cleared the grain

y image that ma .................................. de me want to cook it's chip

I have wrapped it up ........................... In foil of aluminium

To shield it's little brain ....................... from the poets of Mars

I'm hoping that It's not a pup ............... that ends up in the binium

If it does go wrong again .................... it won't get another fricken poem.

Answer 1

We're sending this one to Mercury.

Answer 2

There will be room for you and your companion in Cryo-Compartment C.

Answer 3

"Hi!",

Your so good. Very entertaining and I've never seen two in 1.

You made it flow nicely.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 4

I can't even read the poem, I love your avator! lol

Answer 5

Meet the poetry police.

http://www.chilloutzone.de/files/0807150...

Answer 6

Outstanding darlingk.

Answer 7

Very droll. Very good.