Have i improved? - check out my new tune please?

Question

www.myspace.com/ayystahh

let me know what you think PLEASE.

AND THANK YOUUU.

ALSO ADD ME IF YOU HAVE MYSPACEEE..

ALLSSSOOOO DOES ANYONE KNOW WAYS OF PROMOTION IF THEY DO PLEASE LET ME KNOW PLEASE THANK YOU!!!

Answer 1

I couldn't understand you, your voice is weird. And you have a major accent. Soo I couldn't really judge your lyrics b/c I didn't understand a d**n thing you said. lol

Answer 2

In all seriousness, you are not, and never will be a successful rapper. I am sure you're heart is in the right place, but that was terrible.

I am being honest, please look for another line of work