Have i used french correctly to introduce myself and is it readable? please tranlsate what i wrote thanku.?

Question

Je m'appelle Abtar Miah. J'ai quatorze ans. Mon anniversaire est le trois Janvier. Je suis grande. J'ai les cheveux noir et les yeux marron. J'habite la rue Woolmore, Londres, Angleterre, dans haut appartement. J'ai un charment, sympa, timide et assez funny.

Answer 1

Here's your text with some corrections: Je m'appelle A.M. J'ai quatorze ans. Mon anniversaire est le trois janvier. Je suis grande. J'ai les cheveux noirs et les yeux marron. J'habite la rue Woolmore, Londres, dans un appartement haut. Je suis charmante, sympa, timide et assez drôle.

Translation: My name is A.M. I'm 14. My birthday is January 3rd. I'm tall. I have black hair and brown eyes. I live in Woolmore Street, London, in a high flat. I'm charming, friendly, shy and quite funny.

Note: If you live high up you could say which floor - e.g. au vingtième étage - on the 20th floor.

Answer 2

My name is Abtar Miah. I am 14 years old. My birthday is on the 3rd January. I am tall. I have black hair and brown eyes. I live on Woolmore St, London, England, in a high (?) appartment. I have a I have a charms, sympa, shy and enough funny. ( I wasn't sure on the last sentence so that came from a translation site..)

Answer 3

yeah! :)

My name is Abtar Miah. I am fourteen uears old. My birthday in the 3rd of January. I am tell. My hair is black and my eyes marroon/brown. I live on Woolmore street, London, England in a tall/high apartment. I have one charm, nice, timid and funny enough.

Not practised French in over a year, so I think I did pretty well!

Answer 4

Bonjour,

You made a few mistakes > j'ai les cheveux noirs et les yeux marrons (plural so you must put an S to adjectives). J'habite x*x dans un GRAND appartement (large flat I guess, right?). Je suis jolie (do you mean cute, good-looking?), sympa, timide mais assez drôle.

Hope it helps!

Answer 5

My name is Abtar Miah. I am fourteen uears old. My birthday in the 3rd of January. I am tell. My hair is black and my eyes brown I live on Woolmore street, London, England in a tall apartment. I have one charm, nice, timid and funny enough.

i know this and ive only been learning french for 1 month yay me