Question:

Have you ever been truly "Alone"? (Prose or Poetry?)?

by Guest59820  |  earlier

0 LIKES UnLike

Alone

Icicles strung outside

the window sills;

yesterdays warm rain

suddenly transformed

into frozen icy traps

hidden beneath mountains

of hardened snow.

Bone marrow cold it was,

the coldest climate

I'd ever experienced.

...and I'd survived

many a rough winter,

but this time should

have been different;

for I was inside,

body adjacent to fireplace;

yet heat was non-existent,

as raging fire climbed

above its burning embers.

... and no matter

how I bundled myself

in cotton or wool;

I was still juxtaposed

to an inner frozen chill.

That's what being alone

and unloved does you see;

my coldest winter

has arrived on the icy clouds

of wind driven disparity,

where the sun

neither rises or sets,

nor is there warmth or light,

for I am blinded,

engulfed in darkness.

My only wish,

someone

hold

me.

PROSE: the ordinary language people use in speaking or writing b: a literary medium distinguished from poetry especially by its greater irregularity and variety of rhythm and its closer correspondence to the patterns of everyday speech

POETRY: writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm

 Tags:

   Report

5 ANSWERS


  1. a little bit of both depending on how you look at it  


  2. It has some aspects of poetry, but I would have to argue that this is prose, because it's so sporadic. I've seen alternating rhythms before but this one is very off, not iambic, or dactylic.. hmm. it's definitely free verse, but even free verse has more reason than this one. Don't get me wrong it's beautiful, but I would say that it leans more towards prose..  

  3. Bleakness painted well here.  The coldness in a soul unloved is truly the extreme in cold.  Now enough of depressed, go write a poem about E Harmony!  Wait....that might be depressing too!  

  4. Wow, this blows me away. It is definitely poetry.I is also full of vision and deep feeling. I got chills reading it.

  5. Beautifully written.You are in a slump you need to dump.I've been there.Forgot how it felt,you brought back memories, I thought I had forgotten.I guess we never really forget the rotten times in our lives or the really great times.

Question Stats

Latest activity: earlier.
This question has 5 answers.

BECOME A GUIDE

Share your knowledge and help people by answering questions.