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"Meaningful Affair" - acrostic quadrifid

Kisses whisper on the secrets of my soot-stained soul,

Indicting against me the vows I swore

Never to give another my heart.

Damned against time, I find without you I am not whole,

Regretting that I can't give anything more,

Even so, my ring and I must part.

Doomed before we even had a start,

Scared to death, I will still grasp your precious hand.

Obedience to a different god, one without shame.

Up 'til this moment, we could play it smart.

Listen to me now, forbidden love can stand.

Stay with me, we were wrong, we should both take the blame.

Author's Note: This is not from personal experience.

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  1. An acrostic on the left side, a complex rhyming pattern on the right, and in between, intense emotion eloquently expressed with words that are like translucent porcelain - hard and delicate. Not too shabby.


  2. Fine..& gentle

    It poem goes through..

    like a silk in needle

    I felt so

    Fine .. & tender

    And here U go..

    sleep in wonder

    Awake in glow

    Write again!!

  3. You are beginning to gain your musings back... This is one of the best I have seen form you in a while! Not that any of you others were c**p...

  4. This is excellent...I think I might have a new favorite of yours!

  5. The quandry, presented well.  I like.

  6. This is a huge leap forward. I can't say enough.

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